Services and Fees - Script
First 10 pages turned
You can email me your first 10 pages and I will show you how to turn each one into a
page-turner for $100 paid through PayPal. Just scroll
down to the bottom of this page to "Payment
Procedure". I look forward to showing you how to
"grab a producer/reader".
ASSISTANCE FOR YOUR SCREENPLAY
PAGE-BY-PAGE SCRIPT NOTES
(beyond coverage for the new and seasoned writer)
You can go beyond the coverage level by receiving script notes,
which is an even more detailed, penetrating, and expansive
assessment of your screenplay that will assist you in
your next draft. This is where I use my experience as a story analyst
consultant /script advisor and screenwriter to spot what
adjustments concerning pace, tone, tension, structure, story
arc, character development, dialogue, description/action,
script formatting and any other elements that are necessary for
your screenplay to be seriously considered for purchase.
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ASSISTED SCREENPLAY REWRITE
(specific writing suggestions for the new and seasoned
If you want to receive specific screenwriting
suggestions that include description/action and dialogue
(which you are welcome to use and claim authorship of), your
script can immediately take on that professional polish that
agents and studios look for. (See
Services and Fees
Every Script Is Different
*Because your script, whether it be for a feature film,
a short, teleplay, a sitcom, drama, comedy, etc., will have
unique requirements that cover a wide spectrum of assistance
(a polish all the way to an extensive rewrite), you can send
me and let me know what level of assistance you need.
My Basic Services and fees
notes and specific suggestions that guide you
towards your next draft. $600
Four Levels of Assisted Screenplay
1. Formatting, description, editing, proofing
I improve formatting, description, and proof and edit it,
giving it a professional look.
(This will make it a much smoother, easier read for a
$300 (for script 120 pages maximum)
2. Scene Work
Including the above service, while staying with your storyline as
is, I improve the scenes, including the dialogue,
instilling them with more vitality, dramatic/comdic import, and make
them more cinematic (as though the reader was "seeing the movie"
while reading through the script).
$600 (for script 120 pages maximum)
3. Adjusting story
Including both services above, following screenplay structure,
I make changes in the script (including new/adjusted scenes)
== always with your/screenwriter's approval.
$900 (for script 120 pages maximum)
4. Extensive Rewrite
Including all the work above, I deepen/extemd the storyline and
create/develop whatever screenplay elements are needed (e.g.
character arcs, description, dialogue, premise, theme,
emotional track, subtext, etc.) so your screenplay will be
ready for submission. == always with
Normal price range $1600 to $2500 depending
on necessary work involved.
Your screenplay formatted according to current
Personal guidance and consultation in translating a
story idea into a screenplay by telephone consultation
OF YOUR NOVEL TO A SCREENPLAY
guidance, consultation, and writing of a screenplay of your
discussed by email or phone
Advisor to indicate your specific needs regarding your
script and your intended method of payment. You're
welcome to pay through PayPal
or send a check.* You can use
PayPal to pay via all major credit cards as
well as a bank transfer.
*My policy is no refunds.