Script Advisor

Phone Script Consultation


 call (818) 527-2517 or email

Services and Fees - Script Consulting

First 10 pages turned into page-turners ($200)

You can email me your first 10 pages and I will show you how to turn each one into a page-turner for $200 paid through PayPal.  Just scroll down to the bottom of this page to "Payment Procedure". I look forward to showing you how to "grab a producer/reader".



(beyond coverage for the new and seasoned writer)

You can go beyond the coverage level by receiving script notes, which is an even more detailed, penetrating, and expansive assessment of your screenplay that will assist you in your next draft.  This is where I use my experience as a story analyst / script consultant /script advisor and screenwriter to spot what adjustments concerning pace, tone, tension, structure, story arc, character development, dialogue, description/action, script formatting and any other elements that are necessary for your screenplay to be seriously considered for purchase.  (See sample.  See another sample)

(specific writing suggestions for the new and seasoned screenwriter)

If you want to receive specific screenwriting suggestions that include description/action and dialogue (which you are welcome to use and claim authorship of), your script can immediately take on that professional polish that agents and studios look for.  (See sample)

Services and Fees

Every Script Is Different

*Because your script, whether it be for a feature film, a short, teleplay, a sitcom, drama, comedy, etc., will have unique requirements that cover a wide spectrum of assistance (a polish all the way to an extensive rewrite), you can send me email me and let me know what level of assistance you need.

My Basic Services and fees

PAGE-BY-PAGE SCRIPT NOTES  Comprehensive notes and specific suggestions that guide you towards your next draft. $600 


Four Levels of Assisted Screenplay Rewriting:

1. Formatting, description, editing, proofing
I improve  formatting, description, and proof and edit it, giving it a professional look.
(This will make it a much smoother, easier read for a producer.)

$400 (for script 120 pages maximum)

2. Scene Work
Including the above service, while staying with your storyline as is, I  improve the scenes, including the dialogue, instilling them with more vitality, dramatic/comdic import, and make them more cinematic (as though the reader was "seeing the movie" while reading through the script).

$1,000 (for script 120 pages maximum)

3. Adjusting story
Including both services above, following screenplay structure, I make changes in the script (including new/adjusted scenes) == always with your/screenwriter's approval.

$2,000 (for script 120 pages maximum)

4. Extensive Rewrite
Including all the work above, I deepen/extemd the storyline and create/develop whatever screenplay elements are needed (e.g. character arcs, description, dialogue, premise, theme, emotional track, subtext, etc.) so your screenplay will be ready for submission. == always with your/screenwriter's approval.

Normal price range $3,000 to $10,000 depending on necessary work involved.

Your screenplay formatted according to current standards.  $400 

IDEA TO SCRIPT  Personal guidance and consultation in translating a story idea into a screenplay by telephone consultation, including ghost writing on phone. 


ADAPTATION OF YOUR NOVEL TO A SCREENPLAY  Step-by-step guidance, consultation, and writing of a screenplay of your novel.

To be discussed by email or phone

Payment Procedure

E-mail Script Advisor to indicate your specific needs regarding your script and your intended method of payment.  You're welcome to pay through PayPal (Or Venmo). You can use PayPal to pay via all major credit cards as well as a bank transfer.

*My policy is no refunds. 

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