Services and Fees - Script
ASSISTANCE FOR YOUR SCREENPLAY
PAGE-BY-PAGE SCRIPT NOTES
(beyond coverage for the new and seasoned writer)
You can go beyond the coverage level by receiving script notes,
which is an even more detailed, penetrating, and expansive
assessment of your screenplay that will assist you in
your next draft. This is where I use my experience as a story analyst
consultant /script advisor and screenwriter to spot what
adjustments concerning pace, tone, tension, structure, story
arc, character development, dialogue, description/action,
script formatting and any other elements that are necessary for
your screenplay to be seriously considered for purchase.
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ASSISTED SCREENPLAY REWRITE
(specific writing suggestions for the new and seasoned
If you want to receive specific screenwriting
suggestions that include description/action and dialogue
(which you are welcome to use and claim authorship of), your
script can immediately take on that professional polish that
agents and studios look for. (See
Services and Fees
Every Script Is Different
*Because your script, whether it be for a feature film,
a short, teleplay, a sitcom, drama, comedy, etc., will have
unique requirements that cover a wide spectrum of assistance
(a polish all the way to an extensive rewrite), you can send
me and let me know what level of assistance you need.
My Basic Services and fees
notes and specific suggestions that guide you
towards your next draft. $500
Four Levels of Assisted Screenplay
1. Formatting, description, editing, proofing
I move through your script and raise it to a studio-level,
improving formatting, description, and proof and edit it,
giving it a more professional look.
This will make it a much smoother, easier read that a producer
could purchase in order to develop it.
2. Scene Work
Including the above service, while staying with the story as
is, I improve the scenes, including the dialogue,
instilling them with more vitality, dramatic import, and make
them more cinematic (as though the reader was seeing the movie
in his imagination while reading through the script).
3. Adjusting story
Including both services above, I can help the script follow a
screenplay structure by coming up with additional scenes and
adjustments to the story (all according to your approval).
I already have some ideas on how to give it the necessary
three-act structure, following the typical screenplay
structure that is necessary.
4. Extensive Rewrite
Including all the work above, I can, with your approval,
deepen the storyline and the characters and extend and deepen
the story so it will be a fully developed screenplay that a
producer can buy and shoot without needing to develop further
or do any rewriting.
Your screenplay formatted according to current
Personal guidance and consultation in translating a
story idea into a screenplay by telephone consultation
OF YOUR NOVEL TO A SCREENPLAY
guidance, consultation, and writing of a screenplay of your
Advisor to indicate your specific needs regarding your
script and your intended method of payment. You're
welcome to pay through PayPal
or send a check. You can use
PayPal to pay via all major credit cards as
well as a bank transfer.