Sample of Page-By-Page Script Notes For a
Sitcom ("Coach") (Cont'd Page 4)

          (INTO PHONE)  Okay, got it.  (BEAT)

                    HAYDEN

          What!?

                    LUTHER

          He wants to talk to you.

HAYDEN JUMPS AS FAR AWAY FROM THE PHONE AS POSSIBLE AS THOUGH IT'S A PIRANAH.

                    HAYDEN

          Oh, no!  No way!  You're not going

          to catch me talkin' to some psycho!

                    LUTHER

          That's "psychic."  And he says he needs

          to talk to you this time if you want to

          win tomorrow. HOLDS OUT THE PHONE TO HIM)

                    HAYDEN

          (WHINING)  Oh, gee, how did I get myself

          into this. 

                    LUTHER

          Come on, Hayden.  This is costing four

          dollars a minute.

                    HAYDEN

          It's going to cost you more than that

          if somebody finds out I talked to a

          psychic.

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