Sample of Page-By-Page Script Notes For a
Sitcom ("Coach") (Cont'd Page 3)

          (GOING BACK TO THE PHONE)  Okay...

                    HAYDEN

          But whatever you do, be discreet. 

          And don't mention my name!

                    LUTHER

          Right.  (INTO PHONE)  This is

          Luther, the assistant coach to

          the head coach of the Minnesota Bears.

HAYDEN ALMOST HAS A SILENT STROKE.

                    HAYDEN

          Oh, man...!  (HE PACES)

                    LUTHER

          (ON PHONE)  That's right, the Minnesota

          Bears.  Oh, you remember my first call...

          Well, thank you.  That's very nice of you.

          (LAUGHS)

                    HAYDEN

          What are you, best buddies now!?

          Just get the info and get off the line!

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